Daybreak (A Poem)

<pre style="background-color:#ffffff;">
<span style="color:#323232;">Her presence
</span><span style="color:#323232;">intoxicating as
</span><span style="color:#323232;">the smell of sweet honey
</span><span style="color:#323232;">
</span><span style="color:#323232;">her touch sends shivers
</span><span style="color:#323232;">down deep
</span><span style="color:#323232;">to the marrow of my bones
</span><span style="color:#323232;">
</span><span style="color:#323232;">her gaze icy
</span><span style="color:#323232;">yet it burns me
</span><span style="color:#323232;">and everything within
</span><span style="color:#323232;">
</span><span style="color:#323232;">every time
</span><span style="color:#323232;">I pray
</span><span style="color:#323232;">to hold her
</span><span style="color:#323232;">just for a minute longer
</span><span style="color:#323232;">
</span><span style="color:#323232;">yet when the sun comes up
</span><span style="color:#323232;">she is no longer there
</span><span style="color:#323232;">my silent wish
</span><span style="color:#323232;">unanswered
</span><span style="color:#323232;">
</span><span style="color:#323232;">the sheets next to me
</span><span style="color:#323232;">devoid of her warmth
</span><span style="color:#323232;">yet full
</span><span style="color:#323232;">of her fragrance
</span><span style="color:#323232;">
</span><span style="color:#323232;">I sigh and close my eyes
</span><span style="color:#323232;">only to meet her again
</span><span style="color:#323232;">in my dreams
</span>
Arotrios,
@Arotrios@kbin.social avatar

It's good work, but just to let you know, your formatting is breaking when it's posted across instances - getting a code block with a bunch of <span style> tags over here on kbin.

Reprint as it appears beeshaw if your view is broken:

Her presence
intoxicating as
the smell of sweet honey

her touch sends shivers
down deep
to the marrow of my bones

her gaze icy
yet it burns me
and everything within

every time
I pray
to hold her
just for a minute longer

yet when the sun comes up
she is no longer there
my silent wish
unanswered

the sheets next to me
devoid of her warmth
yet full
of her fragrance

I sigh and close my eyes
only to meet her again
in my dreams

Redlayn,

thank you for letting me know :)

  • All
  • Subscribed
  • Moderated
  • Favorites
  • random
  • uselessserver093
  • Food
  • aaaaaaacccccccce
  • [email protected]
  • test
  • CafeMeta
  • testmag
  • MUD
  • RhythmGameZone
  • RSS
  • dabs
  • Socialism
  • KbinCafe
  • TheResearchGuardian
  • Ask_kbincafe
  • oklahoma
  • feritale
  • SuperSentai
  • KamenRider
  • All magazines