TheBaldness,

I haven’t written fiction in a long time, but what you’re describing is exactly an info dump. “Show, don’t tell” comes to mind. Have you considered chopping these books up into much smaller bits, polishing those up and publishing them one by one? The reaction you get would let you know if you’re on the right track.

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