@The_BookishWolf I agree that it seemed longer than it needed to be, to me. Lots of time not moving the plot and a massive cast of teammates and roommates who are mainly scenery. The follow-up, Wildfire, starts similarly slowly but feels better paced in the end, so Grace is either learning or got more aggressively edited the second time through. @bookstodon@readinglightsout@romancelandia